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一首小诗（算诗吗。。）
分享一下，自己原创，大家指正。。
百叶窗，透过阳光
赤壁的伤，一直回荡
如果再挥师南下 请带给我战鼓的怒吼
如果再陷入火场 请赋予我血刃的寒光
道不出的柔情 请原谅。 。 。
--------憾赤壁
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